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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

Jon, I really enjoyed reading this story. In fact, I might post a little review later. ❤

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Jon Edwards's avatar

Wow! Thank you!

Really appreciate it the comment, and if you do end up writing a review, I’d love to read that!

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P.Q. Rubin's avatar

Well, here you go!

Fiction Review: "Chip"

https://pqrubin.substack.com/p/fiction-review-chip

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Scott Roche - he/him's avatar

Interesting! I could see this as the beginning of something more, but it works well as a stand alone short story.

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Jon Edwards's avatar

Thank you Scott!

Perhaps I could expand on it for a novella instead.

Could be an idea once I’ve finished my novel.

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Scott Roche - he/him's avatar

Definitely. I’ve got so many shorts that could be expanded. That’s one reason (of many) I love writing short stories.

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